Monday, 19 August 2013

Magpie #128

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It's said that much depends 
upon a red wheelbarrow
glazed with rain 
beside the white chickens.
Perhaps and perhaps not.
Chickens seek shelter
from the rain and barrows
quickly fill with water.
My own barrow (by Hamelin)
is dark blue. It sits beside the 
red one and and both of them,
the red and blue hold water now
enough to drown the chickens
and perhaps or perhaps not
myself for afters.


Posted for Mag 128, prompted by a photograph by Elena Kalis.



16 comments:

  1. Oh wow profound

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  2. Curiously curious, but quite well done...

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  3. Pouring from vessel to vessel, spilling nary a drop.....brava

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  4. I recognise the WIlliam Carlos Williams. The rest is send-up, surely?

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    1. Thanks Doc. There was me wondering I'm the only person alive who thinks WCW's "poem" is just bloody silly.

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    2. You're not the only one, Lucy! It's no more a 'poem 'than I am...

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  5. Love the way you made us dig deep ... I was not familiar with the William Carlos Williams poem. After reading it, your poem makes perfect sense .. and definitely not silly!

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  6. Whoa, I have never heard that about red wheelbarrows.

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  7. Being lost in the ocean of my own wheelbarrow...I don't even know the color of it. One day (perhaps or perhaps not!) I'll swim to the edge, climb out, and be free to tell you I think you write in deepest places of Universe...and you do it well.
    PEACE and LIGHT

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  8. WCW and his one sentence broken into parts.It's good to try out and experience a haiku like free verse. Your poem did it very well, Lucy!

    Hank

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  9. nicely done......thanks for sharing your words

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  10. Very good - your interpretation brilliant!
    Anna :o]

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  11. Simply wonderful! We always get a literal treat here, Lucy! Another pleasing read!

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  12. I had to go and look that poem up as I'd never heard of it, so thank you for extending my knowledge. Your own poem is a clever response.

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