Excellent practise in editing by trying Stony River's (Susan) Microfiction Monday where we have only 140 characters including spaces to tell the story in this picture.
Ben: Write Mayday message on t’box! Put t’lifebelt on t’soap! Throw them in t’sea!”
Jake: You been castaway too long. You’re losin’ it!”
(140 characters)
Great microfiction piece!
ReplyDeleteLike the accent...how interesting you now live in Scotland. Very creative putting them on an island...I read some of your other poetry... You are very talented. Thanks for your compliment and visit to my blog.
ReplyDeleteNever thought of the island angle. Quite clever!
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