Affliction
"Speak louder, shout, for I am deaf."
They heard the windswept tremolos in awe,
their ebb and flo, as waves crash on the strand,
an undertow to anger, loss, to pain,
his jagged figures challenging despair.
"Speak louder, shout, for I am. Deaf."
They asked “What does your new sonata mean?”
Can you imagine the withering look this brought?
How he might snort and shake his untidy locks?
“Go to your Shakespeare! Read ‘Tempest’” he scoffed.
"Speak louder, shout, for I. Am. Deaf."
‘Tempest’ The nickname stuck! At least it’s more
appropriate than “Moonlight” No moonbeams
light the rage of that finale, never mind
triplets that lap the shore of Lake Lucerne.
Go to “The Tempest”, then. So. Does he mean
his new work is 'rough magic'? Or perhaps
the lilting rondo is Miranda’s dance
at her wedding to noble Ferdinand?
For sure in the wintry gales we hear
a ship grind on the reef, splinter in shards
and sink to the deeps on bass arpeggios
I prefer “Our revels now are ended.”
Here he admits the best of life is over.
From now on all that seems sublime, heroic,
wild, will play out only in his unkempt head,
where still he hears what his ear no longer can,
with courage that proves the artist and the man.
"Speak louder. Shout, for I am DEAF."
Beethoven composed the D minor piano sonata, Op.31 No.2 (sometimes referred to as “The Tempest Sonata”) in 1801/02 at the age of 32, the same year that he wrote the Heiligenstadt Testament in which he admits his almost total deafness.

This was a lovely, erudite, human poem. One of the very best I've read in ages.
ReplyDeleteBravo! Well done!
ReplyDeleteWhat an interesting and poignant poem on the master!
ReplyDeleteYour poem's well worth reading. It captures something of the flavor of Beethoven.
ReplyDeleteA fine and noble response to the prompt. The cruelty of Beethoven's early deafness is represented powerfully here. So sad a conclusion, that Beethoven invested into its writing his sense of the ending of the revels.
ReplyDeleteI read this accomplished poem as being primarily about Beethoven's coming to terms with deafness, and not about the play per se. as Catfish seems to indicate.
ReplyDeleteI notice you have page 1 of the score in your sidebar. The introductory 'adagio" (and its repeats throughout the movement) have been likened to "a voice calling from the tomb."
beautiful.
ReplyDeleteSo powerful ... 'accomplished' as the good doctor has mentioned.
ReplyDeleteHi Lucy, loved poem and the tribute. I suspect Beethoven had my disease, congenital oto-sclerosis which although/ it blocks sound at the middle ear, does not stop one hearing clearly through bone conduction. So, I can imagine him sitting there at his 'piano' with a stick between his teeth, the other end on the frame, hearing the notes and writing scores for orchestras he could never hear! Of course I, unlike the Master, have had surgery and can hear adequately.
ReplyDeleteBTW, re your comment at my place, I am actually a sight reader, so my little limerick was just a bit of fun to employ the 'golf club' idea.
A life without music would be a bleak place to inhabit...
ReplyDeleteDeaf at 32, and yet ever the Master.
ReplyDeleteLoved your poem, part history lesson,
part poetics, smacking of musical
reference, tone, and timbre; to
be read loudly--like I crank up
the blues while driving. Very
impressive, impassioned, and
pounds powerfully on our emotions
without being pedantic.
A very nice read indeed.. Thank you for sharing this.. :)
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Deafness has to be a musician's worst nightmare. You broached this subject beautifully.
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you got talent, keep it up.
such a fine lyrical lesson for me, one who knows very little of this genius... well done!
ReplyDeleteJust wonderful.
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